Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should read only serious, educational books. What is your opinion about this?
Reading is one of the most productive leisure activities one can perform in their free time. Numerous mothers and fathers feel that their offspring should read factual literature rather than reading themselves in fascinating comics or novels. However, this essay opines that this belief is preposterous as perusing different types of written material instill creativity among juveniles.
Many parents think that going through comic books and fancy tales is a futile activity as this printed material does not provide valuable information to the young readers and waste a significant amount of time also. However, such literature boosts the creativity of young minds which in fact helps to enhance their cognitive skills. Story books, for instance, are often accompanied by various illustrations and these visuals help the young readers to imagine different situations in their mind and ameliorate their perception.
In addition to this, factual books solely contain large amount of facts and figures that can be helpful in increasing a child’s grades at school, but are incompetent to provide valuable life lessons. Motivational books, on the other hand, are a valuable source of real life advices from intellectuals across the globe. For example, Wings of Fire, an autobiography from the former president of India Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam, is one of the most influential printed books which stresses on the importance of hard work and dedication and has inspired many school children and adults too. Thus, self-help and story based novels can help the minors to grasp some noteworthy life lessons.
To conclude, even though cramming encyclopedias can bring good grades in an exam but it can never broaden the horizons of a child. Fictional books can aid minors to enhance their perception which would make them responsible citizens of tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3883161512 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73787209345 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2691021311 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209416902574 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711717385063 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528921860595 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119442499438 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647750016972 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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