In Countries where unemployment is high, education should be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested that nations which suffer from the issue of job scarcity should make elementary education mandatory instead of tertiary education. However, this essay completely disagrees with this assertion because a low-level schooling will seize the chances of getting employment from other countries or pursuing entrepreneurship.
To embark with, having a basic schooling will only keep the citizens of a nation performing menial jobs such as daily wagers and part-time workers. Since the workforce of the nation is unskilled in due to the lack of higher secondary schooling, it is unlikely that multinational companies will opt outsource their work there, and the countrymen will be deprived of foreign work opportunities which would otherwise have solved the problem of job scarcity in the country. For instance, because India has a large number of highly skilled engineers, many tech giant such as Google, Facebook and Apple have outsourced their work to India which has resulted in increased job opportunities to the youth of the country. Thus, having a skilled population can even provide job opportunities from other nations in case a state does not have ample employment chances.
In addition to this, high level education can make individuals to set up new businesses rather than becoming job seekers. As an example, a person who has a MBA degree can start and run a new business proficiently in case one does not find any work opportunity in the corporate world. In this way, people not only become self-sufficient to earn their living, but they also generate work opportunities for others.
To conclude, the idea that primary schooling should be made imperative in underdeveloped countries is preposterous as it would only limit the job prospects of such states and the nations will remain underdeveloped the many more years to come.
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Suggestion: many; numerous
...ountry. For instance, because India has a large number of highly skilled engineers, many tech gia...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eekers. As an example, a person who has a MBA degree can start and run a new busi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rdeveloped the many more years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25838926174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98524402792 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9974589635 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.7 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124757221561 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501624189296 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465406348787 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873965944954 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444877407807 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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