Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A large number of parents are sending their wards to other towns and cities recently. while other group of them maintain that children should stay with their immediate family as much as possible. this essay will explain both views and provide personal opinion on the topic.
Firstly, guardians who are tempted to send their adolescent children to stay far from home often do it with a heavy heart but for a good cause. such parents feel going to live away from home prepares them for basic life skills such as managing finance and social situations all by oneself. recent studies have shown that children falling in this category face the challenges in life with stronger resolve and firm determination.
On the other hand, those parents who like their children to be with them as they are growing and getting older always believe that they have better chance of learning good behaviors and moral values if they remain within the home environment. Under the tutelage of their father and mother, such children often refrain from going astray and engaging in anti-social behaviors. Even researched have revealed that people who end up being criminals are often those who didn't have a good parentage.
Personally, I believe it is vital for young ones to have the guidance of their parents but without the expense of opportunities to learn independently and experience things for themselves. if kids are left to grow on their own they will often be lost as to what could be the way forward and the right course of action for them. if I had to make a choice I would allow my child to stay at the hostel of his school on week days and bring him home every weekend. this would make him feel protected and also allow him a free will to experience new things.
In conclusion, many parents allow their children the liberty to stay away from home in a hope that they will grow well-equipped to handle life situations. others cannot allow their children time away from family for the fear that they can be misguided and take wrong path in life. children could do with a mix of both by having access to family members every once in a while.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Suggestion: While
...rds to other towns and cities recently. while other group of them maintain that child...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rds to other towns and cities recently. while other group of them maintain that child...
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...r immediate family as much as possible. this essay will explain both views and provi...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Suggestion: Recent
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... misguided and take wrong path in life. children could do with a mix of both by having a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71733333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38644170262 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7216880306 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225466043462 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750601329732 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568078184883 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131855885897 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333253133186 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.