Nowadays many people do their shopping online. Shopping online is stress free and you get whatever you want through the internet.
However, buying and selling is made easy and fast through online shopping. People do not have to be outside all the time struggling to buy what they need, because they get whatever they want through online shopping. People buy things online within and outside the country whenever they want, and it is delivered to them without stress.
Since shopping online is made easy and quick, people no longer take the risk of traveling from one place to the other for buying and selling. Online shopping has really helped most businesses grow fast, because you shop from wherever you are.
Meanwhile, shopping online has its disadvantages. When buying online you do not have the chance to physically check the quality of your commodities. For example, you are Ordered for a wine red dress but it is just a red dress that is delivered. At this point one will prefer to go to the shop and get it by themselves rather than online shopping.
Further more, because of the disappointments most people have encountered through online shopping, it is better to go to the market to enable you get exactly what you want.
Finally, when you shop online and the wrong thing is delivered to you, the online business persons takes a lot of time to take it back for a change. Sometimes they online business people’s do not respond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough online shopping. People do not have to be outside all the time struggling to...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... shopping online has its disadvantages. When buying online you do not have the chanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, really, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84738955823 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46622971261 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510040160643 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.387177219 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318457674947 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149219457091 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131324870921 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201661013763 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130478646106 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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