Different countries have different punishment systems. Some of them using a standard punishment for all kind of criminals that has brought several upsides and downsides.
On one hand, There are numerous benefits in setting an equal punishment procedure which convinced many governments to consider it as a sole solution. Firstly, it can streamline the process of judgment which leads to obtain faster result and time saving. Secondly, as a result of having a clear and documented penalties, people who aim to commit a crime with lower motivation might change their minds. Finally, having a determined and permanent discipline causes less misjudgment that comes from different judge attitudes.
On the other hand, limited penalty system creates ill-effects which have dire consequences for specific parts of community in different occasions. It is said that decreasing the investigation and evidence collecting time which is common among society using a fixed punishment, results in judgment in considerable complex cases.
Moreover, having a same penalty for different criminal types and scales is the opposite of fairness and brings miscarriage judgment for communities. For example, in 1998 a woman sentenced 10-year prison and a man who killed 5 children in their schools got them same trial.
In conclusion, using a fixed punishment system in courts is an efficient way to save money and time spending for checking different cases with different scenarios, although certain negative points such as unfairness and injustice are deniable.
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- Music plays a vital role in our society How much has music influenced the way we think today What do you think is key role of music in nowadays world 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52742616034 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92320723828 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2650595916 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258682815537 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887896102183 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492096666237 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135735376017 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044269981682 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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