Many people believe it is the school’s responsibility to teach children not to eat junk food. Others believe parents should do this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Today, people are divided on the issue regarding the good eating habits of children. some believe that school should look after it while others say that it is parents' responsibility. This essay will discuss both these views and followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, It is clearly seen that today, most of the children are having their lunch in their schools. This will make schools an ideal place for practicing good eating habits among the students. Which emphasize on healthier food over the junk food. this is because children' holistic development highly depends on the child's eating habits. Healthier the food prominent the development of children can be confirmed. Secondly, the teacher is well equipped to make pupils understand the value of nutritious food by means of various examples. For instance, schools can create awareness among students about illnesses spread because of junk food such as obesity.
On the other hand, proponents believe that parents should take a driving role for better eating habits. Firstly, they believe that parents have more insight into their child's need for food and their test. They are well aware of their childs' schedule and physical fitness. So, parents must look after the child's eating habits. Moreover, due to emotional bonding children often listen to their parents and follow the instruction of parents to avoid junk food.
To sum up, schools and parents both play a vital role in the overall developments of adolescences. SO, it the responsibility of both parents and schools to imply good eating practice by having healthy food over junk food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15267175573 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48645301087 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3537560978 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35955051496 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112636844278 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666490484066 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236325979435 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666646119752 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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