The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. Agree or Disagree?
There no doubt that the excessive use of natural resources can lead to detrimental effects on the environment and I fully agree with the statement that it should be controlled by the governments. This essay will advocates my arguments.
To begin with, These natural resources are available in limited amount and play vital role in our lives. The overuse of such resources can have catastrophic effects on our lives and environment. For an instance, the clean water. Today, due to containment of environment by means of pollution and this is to promote industrialization. This phenomenon have created scarcity of clean water in many parts of world like south Africa, where people have thrive for miles to get water to fulfill their thrust and to stay alive. Secondly, huge amount of natural oil is used by transportation system to fulfill the needs of citizen. this overuse of petrol and diesel have emitted huge amount of green house gases and has resulting in to global warming. As an effect polar ice is melting faster then ever and increased the sea level. If this will not be controlled then urban area on coastal line will be drawn into sea. Furthermore, This extreme amount of pollution has changed seasonal cycle and has resulted in to failure of many crops. This will result into starvation among the civilization.
To control the overuse of these natural resources the governments should enforce the strict rules by which this wasted can be discouraged. Government also spread awareness regarding cause and effect of these overuse.Despite of this, as good citizen, we should practice to live our lives by conserving natural resources for our next generation.
To sumup, control the overuse of natural resources and prevent the detrimental effect on environment should be combined efforts from the government and citizen of world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'advocate'
Suggestion: advocate
...led by the governments. This essay will advocates my arguments. To begin with, These n...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thrived', 'thriven'.
Suggestion: thrived; thriven
...ld like south Africa, where people have thrive for miles to get water to fulfill their...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...system to fulfill the needs of citizen. this overuse of petrol and diesel have emitt...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'faster than'?
Suggestion: faster than
...ming. As an effect polar ice is melting faster then ever and increased the sea level. If th...
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Line 3, column 785, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s an effect polar ice is melting faster then ever and increased the sea level. If th...
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Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... then ever and increased the sea level. If this will not be controlled then urban ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...rding cause and effect of these overuse.Despite of this, as good citizen, we should pra...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice living'.
Suggestion: practice living
...ite of this, as good citizen, we should practice to live our lives by conserving natural resourc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11920529801 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85179896472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.156011377 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235813286633 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764607695521 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469840491364 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148477103314 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277471122387 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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