Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer, and required examples.
Inventions have always played an important role in the human life. Starting from the invention of wheel, to the mobile phones we use in the contemporary world have made a drastic change in the human life. Even though there are many advantage of the modern invention, some people are against it, they believe that it is causing more issue than benefit. However, this essay agrees with the notion that people are really benefited of modern inventions rather than being negatively impacted.
On the one hand, modern technology have made traveling to places easier and faster. With the new invention of mono-rail and metro train, traveling to places has become much easier. Earlier, the people had to depend on buses and had to bare with traffic and climatic conditions. But with the inventions of modern travel arrangements people can easily travel from one place to another without any hustle.
Modern inventions have made the whole world closer and provide information across the globe at your finger tip. With the new invention of phones and network technologies, people across the world can communicate with ease without facing any issue. Earlier, it was very difficult to communicate with someone who is abroad and know the latest news happening around the world. With the latest technologies, these have been made much easier, we can communicate with our loved once by seeing them and we are always updated by the latest news from all over the world.
To recapitulate, modern invention have made traveling to places much easier, also helped us in keeping in touch with our loved ones and being updated about what's happening around the world. In short the modern technologies have made our life much easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...n the human life. Even though there are many advantage of the modern invention, some people ar...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...g to places easier and faster. With the new invention of mono-rail and metro train, traveling...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... the globe at your finger tip. With the new invention of phones and network technologies, peo...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... our loved ones and being updated about whats happening around the world. In short th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05281690141 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4687970426 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1473211603 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192411666922 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816637616254 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624734038815 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131622532514 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821566391063 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.