Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive.
discuss these both views and give your opinion.
Music plays a fundamental role in human life by entertaining and rejuvenating people. It is often argued by some people that music is likely to have a adverse impact on youngsters; however, rest of them support the view that if would influence teenagers positively in many ways. In my opinion, music has both the beneficial and detrimental impacts that i will cover in this essay.
On the one hand, There are various potential reasons of why some individuals views that modern songs has a few disadvantages for young generation. First of all, younger ones are under the great influence of present musical system such as pop songs, sad songs as they are more techno- savy in these days and prefer to listen to modern music instead of spending quality time on other essential activities. Therefore, they try to imitate the songs because they are vulnerable and unaware about what is acceptable or unacceptable. For example, some songs are created to provoke people and comprise of violence and others promote use of weapons. Moreover, they do not only listen to music but also visualize the actions via mobile phones or computers. Consequently, it might leads to harmful consequences for children as they possibly can indulge in bad company. Secondly, children spend most of the time hearing their favourable tunes on smart phones which results in decreasing their interest in studies. Hence, performance in school would affect adversely.
Finally, listening music for a long time may bring sedentary lifestyles among pupils as they spend whole day in front of computer screens which can cause many
health disorders for them.
On the other hand, Along with negatives, a number of benefits are attached to the trend of listening music by young ones. First of all, some lyrics are based on religious thoughts as many artists brings these kinds of songs in an effort to promote good thought which guide youngsters to be self confident and motivated. As a result, they inspire by these kinds of lyrics which allow them grow as a responsible and generous person. Secondly, children can learn to respect elders and love younger ones as music inculcates some values and virtues to young ones.
To conclude, Although modern sounds of music has some unfavourable impacts on teenagers, i believe that there are some tunes not all which impacts young ones badly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04092071611 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63364032872 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575447570332 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.904027469 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.941176471 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1764705882 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288720426458 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829680845271 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067946042896 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138669313456 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848505026712 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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