Many people believe sport lessons are important in school timetable. Both boys and girls should take part in sports. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experience.
It is commonly believed by many that physical education activities are an essential part of school timetable and every child should participate in it. I completely agree with this belief as sports are as equally important as studies are, for the growth of a student.
In this modern world, children are more interested in computer games and virtual reality games rather than sports, however these games had made them couch potatoes. Thus I agree that sports should be important part of school studies and compulsory for all. These days, it is common to see many kids struggling with health issues such as obesity, laziness. An easiest way to resolve such issues is to encourage them for more physical activities and not big screen games. A recent survey has found that children who are active in sports activity are 80% less prone to such health problems.
Another reason for why I agree with the belief of compulsory sports for boys and girls at school level is that Sports could teach them many lessons, which they could not learn by studying other subjects. For example, being a part of team teaches you a lesson of team spirit and team work, while being captain of team provides you qualities of leadership. Scoring decent marks is not enough in today's competent world, a student has to be good manager, quick learner and super active as well to mark his presence in the society.
In conclusion, I fully agree with the beliefs of those who thinks that sports should be a significant portion of school timetable and both boys and girls should participate in it. Sports is a kind of fun-loving activity that could teach us great lessons and also helps us to stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81724137931 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41445557412 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4749305051 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20631890282 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797379574625 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673066214013 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140078041269 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357285367188 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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