You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to share some good news with you that I have planned to come back Mumbai,india at the end of this month and start my business there.
As I already mentioned you many times that how unhappy I was with my current job, it was not encouraging anymore and also I believe it is not what I really wanted to do. I decided to resign from this job. I have heard due to new government in india, the property business is on its highest peak, the rates of properties had truly expanded and new building projects had flooded in Mumbai.
I have booked the tickets for 1st July, I will reach Mumbai on 2nd July. After meeting my parents and completing some important stuff, I will meet you at local club house. You can contact me on my father's number which is 9878454578, as my mobile number will not work in india.
Waiting to see you soon and discuss my further plans.
Warm Regards
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , india
... that I have planned to come back Mumbai,india at the end of this month and start my b...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ding projects had flooded in Mumbai. I have booked the tickets for 1st July, I...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37634408602 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28536997968 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6193994744 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191208446088 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697854840391 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467614173821 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114553863259 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191067687776 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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