Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Some people believe woman have more potential to be a better parent while others think that men are able to be a good parents as well. Despite the fact that women play a critical role in raising children, but it is true to say that men, although I have some reluctance, never could be as good as women in growing up and training a child.
First of all, it should be stuck in mind that women have a really close relationship with their children as a result of 9 month pregnancy. A great deal of research about the emotional connection between child and parents have been done and according to the obtained results, mothers have a deepest connection rather than fathers. Scientifics believe this is consequence of hormones changing during this period. So, it is clear that mother can understand their children more effectively. They have a good sense of children’s needs. Mother are able to allocate most of their times to provide children requirements or prepare food or caring of them.
Another fact about this assertion is that most of the woman are multitasking. This refer to the issue that women are able to do different task at the same time. For example, an employee mother, can manage her job description during work time, and also, schedule for picking up her child from school and making a shopping list. As a matter of fact, most of the women are responsible for housework issues such as laundry or shopping the grocery which indicate that they can manage time very well and handle all task appropriately. They care about every details such as feeling of child, his or her requirement, her or his health situation or education.
On the other hand, men are considered as a single-tasking humanity. Most of them are not tolerate to do any other task besides their own job descriptions. Also, they are not enough flexible to manage any unpredictable things in their schedule such as staying a night awake to look after a sick child. They can focus on one thing at the same time and prefer to finish one operation at first then start a new challenge.
By taking everything into consideration, it seems woman are able to be better parents for some obvious reason such as their abilities to do different tasks concurrently, or their flexibility. But the most important reason is women emotional connection with children that forms throughout the pregnancy period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pregnancy' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pregnancies'.
Suggestion: pregnancies
...h their children as a result of 9 month pregnancy. A great deal of research about the emo...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...g to the obtained results, mothers have a deepest connection rather than fathers....
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... sense of children's needs. Mother are able to allocate most of their times to...
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Line 13, column 90, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tolerated'.
Suggestion: tolerated
...-tasking humanity. Most of them are not tolerate to do any other task besides their own ...
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Line 13, column 90, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'tolerate doing'.
Suggestion: tolerate doing
...-tasking humanity. Most of them are not tolerate to do any other task besides their own job de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, really, so, then, well, while, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85819070905 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74389073045 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525672371638 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.159363229 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.578947368 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285584799648 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853838324431 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679868329227 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159872870716 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918011869782 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.