Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater
role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Some would argue that females can be the better parents in comparison to males, because of this they have major role in nourishment of their child in maximum families while others say that men are also having the same capability as women at parenting.While men roles are changing and they are also doing good care of their children, i believe no one can replace women in this as they have so many qualities to nourish their child.
On the one hand , in this evolutionary world men are doing all the household tasks including taking care of their child during whole day. Father also teaches their infants plethora of things during their childhood while working to earn money for their family. For instance , in a research on family and parenting by the Delhi human resources department states that in 30 percent of families in their State that after 2010, men spends more of their daytime with their son or daughter and helping them to learn new skills. However, I believe no one have better understanding than women in knowing reason behind their child activity.
On the other hand , Mother have more caring attitude than anyone and they know needs of their baby by seeing on their face. Females are good in showing their love and kindness to their kid and loves more than the males. At the starting in this world all toddlers wants love from others and women are good in displaying love and handling them very gently For example, as per study in metro cities, in some of societies nowadays females are the single parents and they are better in both nourishing of their child and in earning money to run their families. I believe women are better than man for the child bright future because they understands their baby fast than their father.
In conclusion , Agglomerating all the facts, I would like to ingeminate that, every children needs more love and attention during the childhood to understand by their parents and women always outweigh the men for giving better future to their kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80579710145 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35198003471 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498550724638 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.887281167 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.8 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201483172412 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100396491646 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718528786318 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153952120158 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660290306769 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.