Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting
Parenting is not an easy responsibility. It requires utmost care and concentration to raise a child. Some people believes that it is only a mother who plays
vital role in raising a child but that is not true in all aspects. This essay speaks about, how the role of a man is equally important
and how the duties should be shared between parents.Firstly, this essay will explain about the role and responsibilities of parents
and secondly I would like to discuss about importance of father in child upbringing.
To begin with, Ever since a child is born parents needs to take care of every minor detail. Starting from changing diapers, feeding, brushing teeth etc.
As the child grows the burden grows equally on parents. A little one who have started going to school now will need more attention such as preparing
lunch box for him/her,getting the homework done or preparing for fancy dress competition. Day by day the responsibility increase and parents needs to plan
well for other. It is always observed that the parents who give less time to their children will always regret about it in the end as such youngsters often gets
deviated from the motto in their life.
In most of the families these days, both mother are father are working professionals.So it will be judgmental to say that only the women is in charge
of preparing food for a child or only father is responsible to drop the children to school. The job is divided equally.
It is true that womens are more soft spoken and caring and a child will have more affection towards mother. But an old survey says that men are more sensitive
towards their family but they have hard time expressing it. However they try to protect their children silently and puts a lot of efforts to make their child best in every situation.
This shows that if a man is not giving attention to growth of his loved one than there are higher chances of loosing the control over child. With strict nature of
father children will be afraid to do harmful activities in society.
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- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time jobs and see it is a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 78
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 73
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 73
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting 67
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time jobs and see it is a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75492957746 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64189312537 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552112676056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4477972278 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173663118247 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508769093078 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034702583675 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515021319847 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354324330608 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.