It has long been a subject of discussion whether most individuals work hard to earn paper money or not. In my opinion, I completely agree that money provide great assistance for financial stability and boost confidence of an individual.
Individuals who has hectic schedule in different streams construction, hospitals, for instance able to earn more. As a result, able to become financially stable. Even though money is not responsible for happiness, shelter, food, and other essential things are important for survival which leads to make people happy. A recent survey was conducted by Stanford University that most people go to work for long hours in order to fullfil their family needs. Therefore, in my view point money assist to make people economic independent.
Another possible reason is to become independent and build confidence. An academic research conducted and published by Hindustan Times that when a person earn while doing job, receive pay which increase his self-esteem. This is due to the fact that they are able to purchase anything they need in their life. Consequently, workers particullarly in healthcare sector work more than tweleve hours so that receive six figure salary. Due to this, working women or men has more freedom as well as confident as compare to others.
In conclusion, from what we have discussed above, I believe that no doubt, money is not responsible for making a person happy but nowadays working hard to earn dollars is a basic necessity to pay bills on time as well as become independent in society.
- Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries Why is this What effects does this have on society
- You recently took a trip to another city and you had a plan to visit your friend who is living there However you couldn t see him her Write a letter to your friend and say Apologize for not being able to meet Give your reasons Suggest how you can meet him
- Some people think it is better for people to change their careers at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress Do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12598425197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82593806936 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9696198539 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29985345008 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860958973823 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048347115983 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168206571872 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030724792555 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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