Many people think advertisements are not useful for customers while others think that they are important for customers. Give your opinion.
Awareness of products are often presented through ads on different platforms such as TV, internet and newspapers. It is argued by some individuals that these presentations are useless for clients, however, other do not agree and believe they are valuable for customers. Before leading to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the views in following paragraphs.
Advertisements are the source of information about products in the market. It has major role to convey customers about the product details. For instance, during the crises of Maggie noodles in India, advertisement was the only means to know about the product availability in the market. For those reasons only companies spend billions of dollars on advertisement to make people aware about their products in the market.
On the other hand, adverts sometimes provide misleading information to gain more attention from customers. Claiming on nutritional values to gain market share is often tried by various organizations. For instances, advertisement of milk by a popular athlete can manipulate consumers mind while buying these products, therefore, these advertisements does not serve the correct purpose and may deceive the consumer.
In my opinion, the control on presentation of advertisement is vital to convey the correct and appropriate information. Hence, I believe that advertisements are essential but the screening of ads by regulatory authority is much needed.
In conclusion, while, advertisement can misguide their customers about the products, I think without advertisement it will be difficult to know about the varieties of product available in the market. Hence, adverts are important for customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6328125 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19728889061 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1225076756 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275002430266 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879735994698 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759201814652 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144361852914 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633444028479 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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