Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Growing up in any particular environment and regional conditions determine the successfulness of a person. This belief is prevalent among people who are effortless and tend to blame conditions responsible for their failures. I have different outlook toward life and believe that hard work, attitude and determination play a major role in a person’s success.
Looking into the conditional aspect of being a success, some people say that a person’s native place may lack resources like good schools and higher education institutes, etc. and motivational factors like an influential or rich person not staying in that region. To have access to these amenities a person has to move out of his native place. Companionship with an established person also determines the success of a person.
Having said that, some famous personalities like Mark Zuckerberg and Steve Jobs, who are college drop-outs, influence their regional young generation. Their success boosts the morale of people following their dreams. But as these renowned people do not stay in their native places, also promotes penetration of their follows to metro cities. It is one’s hard work and chasing dreams that lead to the path of being a success.
Concluding this discussion, I strongly emphasize that one’s regional condition is not the hindrance in one’s success. It’s his/her hard work, dedication, and courage to overcome any limitations that ascertains a prosperous life. I would like to quotes that “For those who can see well in the darkness, there is no darkness and for those who cannot see well in light, there is no light”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...es like Mark Zuckerberg and Steve Jobs, who are college drop-outs, influence their regi...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'quote'.
Suggestion: quote
...ains a prosperous life. I would like to quotes that 'For those who can see well i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34749034749 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02374043469 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2283380412 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293505404932 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108697237311 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645797167741 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18499141913 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579423163185 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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