People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on individual and on society?
Going by the recent studies conducted by medical councils of different countries, it is ascertained that people are more sleep-deprived than in the past. There are many factors that contribute to sleeplessness and this disruption of the circadian rhythm has detrimental effects on one’s health and humanity as a whole.
Increasing competition and stress levels at the workplace have constrained people to take enough rest. They hardly appraise the consequences of strains they are inadvertently putting on their minds and bodies. People are falling ill and their health is deteriorating, day by day. They are under the wrong impression that sleeping less and working more will contribute to better efficiency, but it turns out to be the other way around.
Watching late-night TV shows and spending more time to browse through the internet and social media also contributes to sleep apnea. The younger generation is getting addicted to the bane of technology called ‘world-wide-web’. They chat with friends until the wee hours and watch useless and often misleading information on their gadgets, hence leaving less time for their minds and body organs to rejuvenate and repair. It is established that improper sleeping patterns adversely affect concentration levels in the unsuspecting populace.
In the end, I would like to phrase that “Healthy People makes Healthy Society” and this restlessness is diversely affecting the health of an individual and the society as a whole. “Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise”. If one is not healthy and wealthy, how will he be able to constructively contribute to the betterment of the society?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41573033708 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34097932156 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5639887983 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216408522758 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644718211679 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530508363798 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122428117226 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043183536837 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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