Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? Are there more advantages than disadvantages?
Technology spread quickly all over the world, each house there is at least 2 or 3 people having a mobile. Many reasons encouraged the society to start using the smart phones for texting; some of theses reasons have advantages and disadvantages.
People prefer to send texts instead of calling, since the fees is cheaper and sending many messages won’t cost as 1-minute phone call. First, humans can text anyone overseas easily and less cost, due to the internet services such as, social applications. Second, the internet made the world too close, where people can chat or share large information in between, in less than seconds with zero cost. For example, Whatsapp mobile application is a communication app, that have several features like, chatting, sharing document, image, even by sharing locations; where it approaches the world and life became easy.
On the other hand, sending texts may have disadvantages, due to some reasons like accidents and hacking. First, the number of deaths increased these days, due to cars accident since people the text while driving and lose control and concentration. Second, some phones hold secured information or images and may get hacked from anyone, and exploit this data to abuse others such as, sexual harassment, racism or selling illegal products under their names. For example, each day I receive several text messages on my phone, asking for sending money on this number or share this website online, if not my mobile will be hacked and all the data in it will be lost.
As a conclusion, sending texts has its advantages and disadvantages. Phone made our communication easy and less cost, but we cannot avoid any other problems that might harm our lives and we must know how, when, and where to send a text message.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the theses') or simply say ''some theses''.
Suggestion: some of the theses; some theses
...art using the smart phones for texting; some of theses reasons have advantages and disadvantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, at least, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05423728814 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57628456732 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.336538343 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265099900425 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936238243888 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637622561665 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15220499371 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334372783623 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.