Many people try to look younger than their age.
What are the reasons people do this?
Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, everyone wants to live a younger and healthier life, and they work hard to achieve this. People try to find different ways to look younger than their actual age. What are the things which force them to do this? This essay will discuss the two main reasons behind this phenomenon, which includes, it helps them to make an impression and increase in their confidence among others, however, there are some positive and negative sides of this fact as well.
First of all, look younger than the real age creates an impressive image among colleagues at work which helps them to gain success in their careers. It is observed that look younger helped many people to gain self-possession and make them energetic. Apart from this, people believe that it helps them to increase their overall confidence which boosts them to grow rapidly. To achieve this, people go for workouts in the gymnasium, and they also use many cosmetic products to look younger than their registered age.
In my opinion, it is really great thing for people who are self-obsessed and believe look younger could help them to gain confidence. They also feel, if they wear stylish clothes like youngsters, they look smarter and younger than others, which help them to achieve more further in their lives. On the other side, it has some bad effects on our culture and society, because it pushes people to forget their actual ages and they start living in their unreal ages. For example, when someone looks smarter and younger than the real age, then if someone asks about their age they tell their fake ages which is not true at all.
In conclusion, I would like to pen down that it is considered absolutely respectable to look younger and shorter than real ages, which helps people to build self-confidence and create a good image on folks around. It has some bad things also, when people hide their actual ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, really, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82769230769 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34351680299 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8169731532 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418450289187 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171530529573 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769290785645 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276959550977 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669434072504 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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