Many people try to look younger than their age.
What are the reasons people do this?
Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, everyone wants to live younger and healthier life, and they work hard to achieve this. People try to find different ways to look younger than their official age. What are the things which force them to do this? This essay will discuss the two main reasons behind this phenomenon, which includes, it helps them to make an impression and increase in their confidence among others, and however, the positive and negative sides of this fact will also be discussed further.
First of all, looking young than the real age, creates an impressive image in colleagues at work which helps them to further gain success in their careers. It helps people to achieve self-possession, and make them energetic. Apart from this, people believe that it helps them to increase in their overall confidence which boost them to grow rapidly. To achieve it, people go to gymnasium, and many cosmetic products are used by them to look younger than their registered age.
In my opinion, the individual goals can be achieved by people, and it is really great thing for people who are self-obsessed and believe look younger could help them to gain confidence. They also feel, if they wear stylish cloths like youngsters, they look smarter and younger than others, which help them to achieve further in their lives. On the other hand, it has some bad effects on our culture and society, because it pushes people to forget about their real ages and they start living in their unreal ages. For example, when someone looks younger than the real age, then if someone asks about their age they tell their fake ages which is not true at all.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it is considered absolutely respectable to looks younger than real age, which helps people to build self-confidence and create a good image on folks around. It has some bad things also, when people hide their real ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, really, so, then, apart from, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39967101337 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3834221954 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395324986142 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16011983579 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789810178964 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262827187016 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633529931684 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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