Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. While other think it is a waste of money. What's your opinion?
In the current era, all the youngster is having a mindset that enough money is must better than free time where some have oppositive viewpoints. This essays will elucidate further using required arugments and example.
there are myraid of reasons which shows that if we have less free time then we can utilise our time appropriately but the most preponderant is that passive income. if we invest our time to create passive income source that we can take early retirement and can enjoy our life more effectively. For instance, one of renowned passive income source is youtube channel. if someone will participate to create a channel, it will not only give them opportunity to earn extra but also can be famous amount same mind set youth.
Another pivotal point is that if we would have lack of free time so we can be master of our mind. we can utilise our time in order to learn and grow in our life. Needless to say that knowledge will give us chance to expore new ways of life. Because of more than enough money we can explore the entire world.
In addition to above mentioned points some people believed that more free time make them more comfortable in spite of less money they would have. if people have more free time so they can explore more options regardless of the profession. Moreover, free time help them to look after their health and relationship as well.
In conclusion, both the view points have their own advantages and disadvantages, however, there should be balance between money and free time. there is very thin line which each individual should be aware about .it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74460431655 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41083688065 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.368158938 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0330496463186 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013811350273 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205173319981 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230796157121 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159366113113 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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