Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. While other think it is a waste of money. What's your opinion?
Most of the people believe that in the current era now fashion has become more tredy thesedays because it is a society symbol.despite this,it enhances person stastus in the world.By contrast,some argues that in totality this is a wastage of money as well as time.This essay will discuss my view with example in the following paragraphs.
Firstly ,at present every person wants to look modern and stylish that is why,they are curious regarding fashion. In India,for example of famous celebrity" Hina khan" she trends in the twitter world for his unique dressing style and she won the award is called fashionable "Diva awards".Moreover,mankind tend to be a sort of attraction.Furthermore,it is atool to be stable in the society with shows their values and somewhere money and luxuries lifestyle.
secondly,no one can stay for long in this life likewise clothes are not similar for lifetime.So why spend more money on it.It is not worthy for everyone to state a symbol with wear expensive dress in the society."Javed akhtar",for example he is known for his simplicity.He is one of the reputed writer in the India.He always says in his interviews fashion doesnot matter for me and always do hardwork to earn money for around about 20 years,so it is useless for him to spend huge amount of money for such items.He says human always known for their calm behaviour and sincerety not for his or her dressing sense.
To conclude,it is considered that fashion plays significant role in every individual life.some people have doubt on it.neverthless,through excellent dress up people known for their style and money.which generally follows by people also,people reflects different kind of image in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, kind of, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28519855596 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5928867211 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.947552589 49.4020404114 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.8 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7667163134 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109960275999 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657868338145 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353867036213 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759554518829 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332658284331 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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