Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. While other think it is a waste of money. What's your opinion?
Rising adoption of modern day apparel among elite class society significantly contributed to the popularity of these clothes among masses. Many retailers are now offering branded clothes at affordable price points. Fashionable clothes are now within the reach of all section of society and it had also opened careers option for many in fashion industry. Subsequent sections will provide my view point with supporting examples.
Increased income among the middle class society with more buying power significantly contributed for urge to be more fashionable. Moreover, with fierce competition among the big retailers like Under Armor, Raulf Lauren and so forth significantly reduced the price points and indirectly created plethora of buyers. For example, premium women party wear from Banana is now priced around $25 as compared to $125 last season. Sound economic condition of masses indirectly led to wider acceptance of fashion.
Global fashion powerhouse are significantly expanding the footprint of both brick and mortar store as well as digital channel to capitalize this market segment. This had directly and indirectly resulted in more job opportunities for aspirants who want to pursue the career in fashion industry. For example, Gucci, Gap, Polo have posted thousands of job openings on monster.com for fashion designers to cope up with the growth in demand.
In conclusion, with both affordability for fashionable clothes and creation of whole new market segment is win-win for both consumers and job seekers. The cons like waste of money is too week an argument in current situation. Fashion industry is now a serious contender as future career path for coming generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45419847328 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83604224196 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9376266381 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14217976686 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519903969963 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043752081778 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891123217917 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387151618981 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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