Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with the large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Due to urbanization, large shopping complexes and supermarkets are emerging in abundance throughout the world. This development has led to the shut down of numerous small shops because of their incompetence to provide the products to consumers at one designated place. In this essay, I shall discuss the impact of supermarkets on local businesses and their owners followed by the optimum solutions to deal with its repercussions.
To begin with, several local people whose bread and butter depend upon their store earnings have to face poverty, which would affect the economy of the nation. This is because their source of income would get devastated and they could no longer earn their livelihood. Take local bakery shops, for example, the alleviating customers at such outlets would not only result in wastage of food but also the workers who are employed there would lose their jobs. Moreover, to counter unemployment, skilled workers would relocate to urban areas and big cities. This, in turn, increases the population in some particular areas and eventually causing various environmental as well as socioeconomic issues. Seen in this light, the construction of supermarkets has an adverse effect on local people and their living standards.
However, combined efforts by the government and the organizations that are responsible for running the big grocery shops or malls and their management. In other words, the supermarkets must consider buying items for their customers from local markets and small businesses, therefore providing them an income source. In this way, it would benefit the domestic communities as well as their customer, i.e. large shopping complexes, because of their better understanding of local consumers and their demands. Furthermore, the governments should also ensure to restrict the development of supermarkets in the area where small shops are sufficient to fulfill consumer needs.
In conclusion, the proliferated construction of large shopping stores has certain demerits for the local communities which include unemployment and ameliorated relocation to other cities with more opportunities. In the future, the incorporation of both small and large markets and the sanctioning of required regulations by the government could help in improving these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57264957265 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02947214539 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.368490914 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278837079691 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096680059044 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446710779254 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179667297624 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135370388608 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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