Theseday , It is believed that children shouldn’t spend too much time using smartphones . Althought , this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that children spend many hours on their smartphones .
On the one hand , i am convinced that children should have smartphones and using it everyday .Firstly , smartphones are extremely convenient for study of children . when student need to find information or to solve a problem , smartphones are really important. I always bring my smartphones in school and i receive many advantages from it. Secondly , parents can easily communicate with their children by calls so the safeness of children always be ensured . I always feel good when i am able to talk to my younger brother everytime.
On the other hand , Spending too much time on smartphones is not good for children . Firstly , children have to be suffered many disease of eyes so the quality of life is affected too much. At present , my eyes are not good because i have used smartphones 5 years .
Secondly , Smartphones have many games and platform of social media so children will spend all of their time to use it , Therefore they don not focus on studying and spending time on relationships Additionally , they will not talk too much with their parents and the family don not happy .
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- The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You sho 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98611111111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86185763113 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1261758704 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177875376091 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799836311276 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602200779113 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129485442833 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065762433897 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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