Many students spend hours a day using smartphones.
Why is this the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, the development of cutting-edge technologies has influenced the young generation which makes them spend a large amount of time on it. I think it is a negative development due to some reasons that will be mentioned in this essay below.
Abusing intelligence services on adolescents follows for several reasons. To begin with, it can facilitate the young generation to access global data. Admittedly, social media such as Facebook, for example, are downloaded on smartphones and contain a wide range of advantageous information allowing people to figure out and satisfy their curiosity. Moreover, opening social circles is extremely significant, thus smartphones are the preeminent amenity with which people can connect with others, and represent individual signatures. While intelligent services are constructive for people, it is argued that spending more time on these technologies is easy to comprehend due to their usefulness.
However, this phenomenon has both positive and negative impacts on younger people. Firstly, in terms of benefits, it can assist people in opening their relationships and assimilating the latest global knowledge. But the other side of the coin is that if people spend a lot of time addicted to smartphones, they not only might waste their time but also might access potentially violent content. Many adolescents, for instance, have been spoiled by unsuitable information from the internet, thereby, uncontrollable information from these technologies can pose negative effects on children.
In conclusion, abusing smartphones is beginning from various reasons which form substantial drawbacks for the young which does not mean utilizing them many times is insignificant as these technologies can help people in some cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64419475655 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14878605561 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3438165703 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134528566686 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535741516165 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653169482623 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900097342043 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559706217234 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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