Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
At this time and age, technology has advanced to a extend that people are more depended on them for household works. I believe, such progress has more merits than demerits. In this essay we will discuss few of them and weigh each side.
Nowadays, people are heavily depended on the machince for house hold duties and have become lazy
Moreover, this advancement has bought more benefits than loss.
Firstly, this has lead life to be less stressful. In metro cities a person uasually work for 9 hours away from home. Ater returning home for stressful hours they have to worry less about a household task. As they can depend on the machine to get their task done. For example, washing cloths is none to be a time consuming and heavy task. With the introduction of washing machice, peole reply on it for washing their cloths. High-tech machinces not ounly was the cloths but dries them too.
Secondly, couples who go for job and has to comback home and do the household work in thier free time, leaving them with very less time to spend with each other. but in this technologiclly avanced age, they can depend on electronic items such as robotic vaccum cleaner to get the home clean and can reply on rice cooker for the cooking, this allows them find family.
To conclude, in my opinion, such advancement of thechnology has more merits than demerits and brings more the benefits to an individuals life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 6, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...rits and brings more the benefits to an individuals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75203252033 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38416973353 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6492820684 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148320421968 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547556580319 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403981712043 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709162496214 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376080822676 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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