In contemporary era, as a security measurement in night in different areas, US has added curfews to keep citizens specially teenagers safe. In my opinion this is a great step to provide safety to youngsters, my reasons are elucidated in ensuing paragraphs with fewer negligible drawbacks.
First of all, kids are gullible in their teenage life i.e. easy to manipulate if parents are not around to pay attention at surrounding. Most of the times in TV or news paper, we see cases of kidnapping which usually happen in night time. If a kid is accompanied by an adult then it is less likely to happen.
Moreover, children in their teens are prone to take risk for the sake of fame or in bad company.
If there is gun shot in night then kids rush to that location to shoot video without thinking about potential danger. Tik Tok has made teenagers crazy that they are willing to do anything even risk their life just to gain fame or views. For examples, recently there was video trend going on where people jump out of there car, do few dance moves and then jump back in while car is still moving. If you ask me, that is crazy! The risk of getting into accident does not worth it.
I do think that some people my argue that too much control provide negative effect on children, they might not grow in comfort zone or cannot think critically on their own. But if we help them by being there and supporting in case they need, they will grow just fine. That is not spoon feeding but caring in my views.
To recapitulate, it is quite conspicuous that there are more merits compare to demerits and providing support and being their for teenager will make better life for them overall as well as save their life. So, I strongly believe that US has taken great step in this direction and everyone around the world should do the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...surrounding. Most of the times in TV or news paper, we see cases of kidnapping which usual...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for the sake of fame or in bad company. If there is gun shot in night then kids ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52710843373 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36487602779 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5067364157 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175518876447 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521139517801 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404690036731 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777096131453 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511278510005 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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