It has been observed that people who work get almost no exercise during their working time or leisure time, hence they have health problems. I believe, it is a very serious matter and it has to be address properly in order to prevent any more health issues.
Personally, I believe that being healthy is one of the most important things in people's lives. Health should be a priority for everyone. Presently, people tend to work 24/7 in order to receive a better salary, however it is not worth it if they lose all the health in the process. Human beings associate work with sitting in an office all day and working on the computer. Constant sitting and computer usage can cause back pain and weak eye sight. It is hard to find strength or desire to go out for an evening walk and breathe fresh air aften a tiring long working day.
Modern life people use technologies to improve their level of life, however, using technologies such as TV or food makers can reduce a lof of exercise in their daily life. The last but not least is people do not pay any attention to sports. If activities such as going to the gym or walking were in their plans, they would not need to worry so much about their health.
In conclusion, I think that every company should provide gym membership or at least an hour of exercise during working time. The working schedule should be organised more properly in order to meet all the specified standarts for good health. Companies need to make sure that comfortable conditions are provided for every worker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...uter usage can cause back pain and weak eye sight. It is hard to find strength or desire ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, as to, at least, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60218978102 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38535689994 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1025771239 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307139065201 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968920339531 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916070197656 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183613199633 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677297620303 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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