many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and using the internet to socialize with others. this can lead to a number of dangerous sitiations which can be threatening for children.
what problems do children face when going online without parental supervision?
how can these problems be solved?
Two days, I read an article about the negative impacts of uncontrolled online access to children. The author said that apart from many advantages, online communication, which is becoming widespread, is posing a number of threats to children provided that their parents are careless to them. In the following two paragraphs, this essay will discuss the problems with such an online connection and suggest possible solutions.
The first problem is a high possibility for children to encounter abusers in social networking. At young ages, people hardly distinguish abusers from adequate internet users because they have little experience in it. Therefore, many abusers take an advantage of it and trick children for illegal actions. Another trouble for young children having limitless access to the internet is that they are exposure to prohibited content. Many websites publish violent images and videos of crime scenes, which may damage their view of the world as well as encourage them to break the law. Besides that content, children can open porn sites and get misled about the healthy relationship with the opposite gender.
A possible solution to the problem with internet abusers is for parents to regularly check all online friends of their children for any sign of seduction. If they do so, children will have a more reliable environment in the Internet. For instance, in Karaganda city, teachers recommend parents to check the friends of their children and spot elder people. To deal with forbidden images and videos, parents could restrict these websites by enabling advanced modes in browsers. This mode will block IP-addresses with abnormal content for children. For example, Google Chrome, which is the most popular browser worldwide, offers various modes, which are protected by long passwords, both for parents and children.
In conclusion, the internet is definitely posing serious threats to young people, but, to make it safer, parents should take steps to decrease these dangers, such as regularly checking online acquaintances of their children for any sign of sexual harassment and restricting access to dangerous websites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40773809524 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69396206701 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0523111786 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39122992832 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1342861097 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594956952138 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23066805928 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572945088164 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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