Nowadays, schooling is very important in our society, and every parent's wish is that their kids make the best out of it. There are many young people who leave school, and hold a negative attitude towards learning. In this essay I will discuss how studying the wrong course in school will affect your learning attitude negatively, and how parent's support for their kids interests will solve this probkem of negative learning attitude.
To begin, when peoole study a course they are not passionate about, it will make them hold a negative attitude towards learning after they leave school. The reason is that the course does not interest them, so this affects their learning attitude negatively. For instance, in 2005, the graduating students from UNIZIK held a negative learning attitude after they left school. It was said that about 30% of them did not study courses they were passionate about. Clearly, if young people study a course they do not like in school, then it will make them hold a negative attitude towards learning.
To continue, the issue of negative learning attitude will be solved if parents continue supporting the interests of their kids. For instance, my Dad supported my interest of being an Engineer, so this support made me hold a positiive attitude towards learning after I left school. Similarly, Andy got the support of her parents to study music which interested her, and this made her hold a positive learning attitude after leaving school. Therefore, negative learning attitudes will be solved as parent's continue supporting the interest of their kids.
To conclude, In this essay I have discussed how studying the wrong course in school will affect your learning attitude negatively, and how parent's support for their kids interests will solve this problem of negative learning attitude
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13087248322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47304508332 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43288590604 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0033712728 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25900400804 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136437653481 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100969619077 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190117584131 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336933676702 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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