As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Globalization means people are becoming more and more similar day by day. Mass Communication are capturing the eyeballs immensely towards them. These resources are making people aware of the events happening in outside world. In my opinion, globalization is not deteriorating the cultural identity of the people or generation.
Due to mass communication, people are showing interest not only in their cultures but in other cultures too. For instance, if we visit the famous pilgrimage, ’Mecca Medina’, people of different religions from all over the world visit over there. Using growing transport people reach to there and become part of their delightful enchanting called Azan. In Mecca, security department checks our passport, and if doesn’t belong to their religion then security ask us to enter into an area where people of different religion stand. From there, we can take blessing by worshipping the god.
Furthermore, we can consider Inter-Caste marriages. In past years, no one is allowed to do inter-caste marriage. People usually kill their children if they ask for inter-caste marriage. But today, people are getting aware of lots of mishaps which have happened earlier with the help of mass media. Mass Media has made people realize about all the deeds they have done which helped them increasing their patience, alertness, attentiveness and sensibility of understanding the difference between good and bad reality.
In compendium, to make people think within the broader spectrum and avoid differentiation, globalization is mandatory. Mass media helped people to wear same clothes or we can say clothes of trendsetting fashion. And, transport only helped to reach to different places easily. Other than this, improvement in globalization, made people knowledgeable and an enhanced sense of responsibility within them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to increase' or 'increase'.
Suggestion: to increase; increase
... deeds they have done which helped them increasing their patience, alertness, attentivenes...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282131661442 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.166144200627 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0783699059561 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407523510972 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0532915360502 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119122257053 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0626959247649 0.0403226058552 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05584460792 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282131661442 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0532915360502 0.0861772015684 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00940438871473 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00940438871473 0.011925033212 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1849.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53356890459 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420494699647 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30035335689 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243816254417 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.16961130742 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05584460792 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.7872101318 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7222222222 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5987596179 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.722222222 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.814263465372 48% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 45.7575579113 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.78313253012 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340901752383 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0982411352591 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684103792664 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461851110772 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0966127833613 0.148594505496 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11814894106 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699722687229 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257330415637 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00737631862168 0.0638462369009 12% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230104389361 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576270462222 0.058150111329 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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