Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that both men and women can do every kind of job equally well. Although there are some jobs where both can perform duties well, I am of the opinion that it depends on the type of job.
There are a number of jobs that can be performed by both genders. First of all, white-collar jobs can be performed equally well as it does not require physical work. These jobs are mostly the office jobs, and are often performed by the graduates and post-graduates of engineering, banking or medical. In addition, jobs that require physical education can also be performed by both genders. It has been seen that men and women competing in big tournaments, and winning medals in sports and extracurricular activities for their countries.
However, there some jobs in which one gender is dominant, and other lacks behind them. Firstly, labor jobs that require a lot of hard work, strength and extra muscles to do duty well. These are mainly male dominant jobs, and it has been seen that women have almost never competed for these kinds of jobs. Furthermore, there are also some jobs where women dominate men, and these are nursing and babysitting. It is a natural characteristic of women to take care of babies, which can never be emulated by men.
In conclusion, while several jobs can be performed equally well such as office jobs, I believe that the jobs which require extra strength can be performed better by men, and jobs such as nursing and babysitting can be done well by women due to their kind-heartedness.
- Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well To what extent do you agree or disagree 77
- Some people say that there is no need to give international aid by governments as they already have unemployment and homeless in their own country.How far do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66871168767 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483018867925 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6265809892 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245567001413 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107488629378 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839957399437 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183334811366 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549755454826 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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