Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly with the existence of new technological appliances, people do not need to write with hands in fact they can use electronic mails, messages to convey information to someone. I completely agree with the statement and will prove my consent with facts, in subsequent paragraphs.
In ancient time people use to write letters to their friends, relatives and other persons so that they can get in touch with them, but now smart phones take this place. With the help of mobile applications and internet facility it is possible to stay in touch with them by using virtual keyboards they can type any language. Moreover audio facility can deliver them a recorded message for those who are unable to type. Whatsapp, Facebook, Intagram and other social networking applications are the best examples of this communication. Hence nowadays, people do not need to bother about hand writing.
In addition, now in these days entrepreneurs have updated their workplaces by installing computers, from where people can take prints. Besides this, people have very conscious about ecosystem so, they usually deal in paper less work with the usage of email attachments, google drives and so on, because the number of tress are reducing rapidly especially for the usage of white and spotless papers. For example, now for applying any vacancy applicants have a privilege to send their documents to the employer through e-mails. Therefore, with this process society can contribute towards release burden from environment.
Conclusively, with the help new communication mediums people do not need to think about the quality of hand writing, because with the feature of these gadgets people can choose any readable style and size of the font.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-30 | camp.vandna@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-30 | uzmalik | 56 | view |
| 2019-05-27 | sudheerssmg | 56 | view |
| 2019-04-24 | vinshu koul | 84 | view |
| 2019-03-28 | Sarah.A | 56 | view |
- Some people think that the internet will replace traditional books in the future. Do you believe this would be positive or a negative development? 73
- In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? 89
- Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society? 78
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 61
- Some people argue that arts such as paintings and music are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...paragraphs. In ancient time people use to write letters to their friends, rela...
^^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...l keyboards they can type any language. Moreover audio facility can deliver them a recor...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...he best examples of this communication. Hence nowadays, people do not need to bother ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny readable style and size of the font.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27338129496 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74328395407 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2576666375 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143613267493 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058466806041 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247608388142 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951072809142 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134730358458 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.