climate change
Recently, the phenomenon of climate change and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate.Although contested by many that eco-friendly technologies are highly beneficial, some issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals.I inclined to believe that renewable energy sources can be plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From an environmental standpoint, renewable sources can provide a society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that eco-friendly technologies as well as keeping natural sources are bound up.According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered decreasing greenhouse gasses due to using electrical and hybrid cars.Thus both ramification of fresh weather and saving fossil fuels apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of healthcare science, fossil fuel might increase the consequences of carbon footprint. Moreover, fundamental aspects of industrial emission relate to this reality that demerits of global warming pertain to deforestation.As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of melting glaciers and rising sea levels are correlated negatively with global warming. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of disappearing the polar bears.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides.I profoundly believe the benefits of eco-friendly technologies far outweigh its drawbacks.Not only do the advantages of renewable sources prove the significance of saving fossil fuels but also pinpoint revitalizing the Earth and atmosphere implications.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-02-05 | topraveesh | 85 | view |
| 2021-12-04 | sahar.sharifi.1984 | 78 | view |
| 2021-10-18 | Alireza.r.m | 71 | view |
| 2021-08-26 | kamyar.diba | 85 | view |
| 2020-12-12 | Behnaz fallah | 88 | view |
- Mass media 88
- happiness and money 56
- climate change 77
- Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases This is one reason that people are living longer lives bow than they did in the past Discuss the effects this might have on society 71
- Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than they did in the past Discuss the effects this might have on society 36
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ding impact has sparked a heated debate.Although contested by many that eco-friendly tec...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... by a substantial number of individuals.I inclined to believe that renewable ener...
^
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssay. From an environmental standpoint, renewable sources can provide a society ...
^^^
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...as keeping natural sources are bound up.According to my own experience, when I was a univ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...due to using electrical and hybrid cars.Thus both ramification of fresh weather and ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...due to using electrical and hybrid cars.Thus both ramification of fresh weather and ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Within the realm of healthcare science, fossil fuel might increase the consequen...
^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...global warming pertain to deforestation.As a tangible example, a scientific resea...
^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to deforestation.As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a pr...
^^
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppearing the polar bears. To conclude, while there are several compelling argum...
^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...eral compelling arguments on both sides.I profoundly believe the benefits of eco-...
^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...technologies far outweigh its drawbacks.Not only do the advantages of renewable sou...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39840676815 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.5024630542 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.219852484 50.4703680194 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.0 104.977214359 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5 20.9669160288 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.25397266985 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0620449936947 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265122081624 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592830996848 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397683122436 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688807373372 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 12.6369458128 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.48 53.1260098522 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.9458128079 208% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.41 11.5310837438 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.39 8.32886699507 149% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.94827586207 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.3980295567 177% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.