More and more money is being spent on buying tickets for sports and cultural events. Is it good or bad? Give your opinion.
Today people spent a lot of money on purchasing tickets for games and cultural events. It has been proven that these activities are quite useful for the nation as well as for the individuals. In my opinion, this scenario had have helped people in many ways which will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
Firstly, participation or being a part of the audience in these programs have been always beneficial for the public. In general, the viewer gets entertainment in their daily routine and help them to relax and forget the pains of his personal life for some time. For instance, watching theatre movies or cricket game in the auditorium is the best way to spend good times as they create such an environment by making a sound system and dim lights in the hall.
Secondly, different cultures can be learnt by taking part in such events or by travelling to different regions of the world. During the trip, people become aware of the cultural activities of the host country. For instance, Football world cup in an Asian country like China allow the opportunity to all soccer lovers to travel to China and enhance the beauty and lifestyle of the Asian continent. Furthermore, it has been proven that such world events are more useful to draw nation people united and relax the international border tensions.
In conclusion, more and more money spent on game events is a profitable step for any nation. No question in that the money should be utilize wisely and according to the need. I believe, there is no harm in taking such steps and from the past record always proven beneficial for the nation as well as individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79225352113 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58193207491 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3434543206 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249792902312 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089082459762 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838998807043 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148890001727 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633087475437 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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