More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obesity is a rising concern for today’s fast pace world which need to be addressed on utmost priority. Although a section of people believe that imposing high price on fast food will solve the problem, many people believe that a numerous ways are possible to tackle this major concern. I will scrutinize both the aspects before forming an opinion at the end.
To embark on, because of our food bad habits, people are putting more weight day-by-day. At young age, people do not realize the severity of excess body weight. However, once they cross 40, people start realizing the issue of overweight as they are suffering from many diseases such as diabetes, joint pain and heart attack. Many people support the idea of increasing price on fatty foods, as this will discourage people not to purchase any oily foods.
However, many people argue that food consumption is nothing related to price. If a person is fond of particular cuisine whether it is fatty or healthy, he/she will definitely purchase. Temptation of people cannot be stopped by rising price. Many solutions are available to manage this issue in our society. Firstly, government and NGOs must run awareness program on merits of healthy food habits and demerits of fatty food consumption. Secondly, adverts on oily foods are quite attracting and it has normally tempted the youth first. Government must impose restriction on such misleading adverts. Moreover, none of fatty food sellers displays the calorie on their food products. Juveniles always believe that these foods are also healthy as they contain all required ingredient for their good health. Lastly, all people must change their food habits on their own will power. Because efforts from government and NGOs to spread awareness will not be fruitful if people do not follow the recommendation. This change in the society can be made possible only if we are determine enough to replace our fatty food with healthy items.
To recapitulate, high pricing, steps from governments and NGOs to spread benefits of healthy food will be effective for a society, if each and every person is not willing to participate in the healthy food habit journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
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Line 4, column 1065, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07541899441 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55891078513 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561452513966 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0842904182 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.85 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27832365517 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828975476431 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643061079463 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166449311492 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061442391997 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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