More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Nowadays, many people are relying on their own cars rather than using public transportation system due to many reasons. However, such a phenomenon brings about some problems and this essay will elaborate some of them such as environmental problems, traffic congestion as well as safety issues. Moreover, one controversial measure to mitigate the problems will be discussed.
Daily use of private cars in cities, big cities in particular, will increase environmental problems. Indeed, each car could produce carbon dioxide that is the harmful substance to our health. In addition, more and more carbon dioxide could increase ozone depletion as well as global warming problems. Another considerable drawback of overreliance on private cars is traffic congestion. While public transport is very suitable way of conveying people in the city in rush hours, tendency of people to use their own cars that may convey limited number of passengers is the main reason of heavy traffics on the streets. Thus, drivers get nervous and may not arrive on time and also waste lots of resources when they are in the traffic. Finally, safety issues could be mentioned as the most important disadvantage of using private cars. According to statistics of road accidents, most of the deaths in roads are due to mistakes of drivers of private cars and public transport including trains, buses and taxis are far away safer for both passengers and pedestrians.
As a general solution, I strongly believe that government should take the lead and encourage people to use public transports by reducing transportation fees.
To sum up, I can see three major problems when public over rely on private cars and many people are not aware of them. Thus, both government and individuals should play their roles so as to improve the current situation.
- In many countries these days the number of people continuing their education after school has increased and the range of courses available at universities and colleges has also increased Do you think this as a positive or negative development 74
- Airline companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets Discuss whether this is a positive or negative development Give some examples based on your own experience 84
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. 49
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...and individuals should play their roles so as to improve the current situation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'however', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in particular', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.116923076923 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123076923077 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0646153846154 0.0501214627716 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0276923076923 0.0437548338989 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0276923076923 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78947008401 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0276923076923 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00163938923432 188% => OK
Determiners: 0.0584615384615 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338461538462 0.021408717616 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123076923077 0.011925033212 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1818.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16271186441 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393220338983 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298305084746 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203389830508 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142372881356 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78947008401 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 62.7501910027 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0714285714 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6901136377 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 0.814263465372 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.901937046 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.04411764706 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468824664151 0.332605444948 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0839881647004 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0616556850186 0.0668466124924 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514265351882 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189720496739 0.148594505496 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168384448405 0.134430193775 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604003736409 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.207628112168 0.324371583561 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480773178386 0.0638462369009 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276999746885 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844450855095 0.058150111329 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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