More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's world, many juveniles are prone to a disease known as obesity. This has been caused due to various reasons which has resulted in the negative dimension on a child's life. The purpose of this essay to surround and gather the informative details of causes and effects of increasing weight problems in children.
Evidently, the inclination of body weight among younglings have been observed due to the modern lifestyle. To commence with, in the past, most of the youth were involved in outdoor activities because there were no smartphones and other technological innovations that have build interest in today's juveniles. These interests are video games, play stations, mobile gaming apps which dominates the free time of children that could be used in other physical activities such as playing cricket, football, basketball, and others outdoor sports. And, the more involvement in technological gadgets, children have become less active and increased their body weight. In addition, the metabolism rate of a child has been effected due to the cause of obesity.
Another reason for increasing overweighed children is junk food. Higher intake of unhealthy foods affects the person's body which begets serious health issues such as heart problems, obesity, diabetes, and other chronic illness. For instance, a recent survey conduced by WHO says that over-consumption of unhealthy meals like street food has caused obesity problems, especially in youngsters and has become a global issue. Therefore, it is essential to follow a healthy balanced meals for everyone to reduce the effect of obesity.
In conclusion, although overweighed problems have been increased globally among children which could become a serious issue, it can be handled in a proper administration if parents and teachers start focusing on their children lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84034044874 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.323873253 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161810836812 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620935042778 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534086036973 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105883948833 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437667935069 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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