More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era, obesity is one of the significant problems across the globe. Especially in developed countries, a sea change has been witnessed on the children's food culture. Because of this problem, there are some inevitable consequences and causes which would be explained in this essay.
To begin with the causes for overweight, lack of physical activity is one of the predominant reasons for children to get obese at a young age itself. Because of this digital world, most of the children are getting addicted to online games through computers or gaming stations. Particularly in wealthy countries, almost every home does have at least a play station or an Ipad. As a result, they prefer these virtual games over any physical activity games. For instance, America is one of the wealthiest countries around the world. This nation is on the list of top 10 countries with high percentage of obese children.
Lack of awareness about healthy food culture is one of the significant reasons for this problem. Especially, fast food and deep fried items are the pivotal reasons for overweight. Most of the people in developed countries are spending huge fortunes on the branded food outlets like kfc, burger king etc. Thus, end up being overweight.
There are many inevitable effects due to the obesity problem. First and foremost, younger generations should be protected from these problems so that they can change their nation's fortune. Being overweight at a young age would lead to an unhealthy lifestyle.
To conclude, it is high time for everyone to consume healthy food habits. Also, the government can ban or reduce fast food outlets so that their people can have a good healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir people can have a good healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, at least, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06049822064 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6457489177 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6823360357 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284090954623 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854490890262 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570829670324 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145418615022 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704247065167 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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