More people are spending their free time watching movies? Why? Good or bad.
In modern society, a large number of individual are opting such kind of hobbies which required less physical activities, like enjoying films, for passing their leisure period. Whether this type of habit is beneficial or not for people, there is a dispute among masses. This essay will illustrate some reasons contributing to this factor and in the justification of my notion, incommodious sides outnumbered the advantageous sides owing to following reasons.
To embark on, first of all, advent of new sophisticated technology contributes to the availability of high definition movies as well as offers huge varieties of genre, therefore a temptation of watching cinema is accelerating by degrees among movie lovers. In other word, more people are becoming interested and choosing watching films as their leisure time activities. Moreover, popularity of physical activities has been dropped over time, especially for those hobbies which required hard work, and less strenuous activities are getting popularity in a distinguishable way. Furthermore, up to some extent, the euphoria of comparing our own life with the silver screen would not be denied when constant viewing of films becomes an addiction.
However, to my mind, there are ample convincing evidences that revealed, suck kind of exercise not only bad for our physique but also have numerous detrimental impact on our mental health. Blue ray from screen induced poor eyesight, impaired thinking ability, obesity owing to less movement and more prone to heart diseases as people constantly take salty popcorn or soft drink while watching movie, are the best possible adverse effect of this habit. In addition, it could be one of the egregious reasons of being isolated from social life, if movie lovers consume most of their weekend or holidays in seeing cinemas though there might be positive impact on acquiring knowledge as to different movie industry of different countries. Finally, mind of youngster can be manipulated by continuous exposure to the fantasy world or crime scenes, yet to be finalized by psychiatrists.
As such it can be concluded that despite watching films is considered as an excellent way of consuming our free time over decades, nowadays the possible side effects of movie addiction should not be ignored. In fact, setting of boundaries is always a blissful thing in every action of ours either in case of recreational or non-recreational activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In modern society, a large number of individual are opting such kind of hobb...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to watch'.
Suggestion: to watch
...le are becoming interested and choosing watching films as their leisure time activities....
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Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a distinguishable way" with adverb for "distinguishable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nuous activities are getting popularity in a distinguishable way. Furthermore, up to some extent, the eu...
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Line 4, column 455, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossible adverse effect of this habit. In addition, it could be one of the egregio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in fact, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34545454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93288736599 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641558441558 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8159912745 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.307692308 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181448109331 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577371164093 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736138310026 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992149016184 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526742447822 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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