In most countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important, this trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In many countries, branded companies and their products are getting popular in recent times as compared to the old times. With this trend, It is seriously deteriorating our way of living life as people are buying more stuffs of large companies. I completely agree that this trend is impacting our life as everyday MNCs are coming with new products and ideas to increase their profits.
To embark this, Large companies are trying to sell their
products each day to attract their stack holders, without being worried about the quality of the item. Multinational companies in the field of FMCG, are trying to grow their customer base. To do so, they have to sell their products to other countries far away from the manufacturing plants. It requires more amount of days to reach the products to the other countries and in order to sustain the product for a long period of time, they add chemicals and preservatives. Hence people are getting fresh items even though paying fair amount of money to buy it and ended up having it with other substances.
On the other hand, In order to impress customers, Big companies are more focused on the advertisement and they pay high amount of money to celebrities to advertise their products. Eventually, Some people buy the stuff to show off among their friends and family, even though sometimes they do not require that thing at all. Thus they spend money on useless stuffs and face issues financially.
In conclusion, Multinational companies should more focused on their quality of the products and trying to provides the items with same quality to all customer’s hand. At the same time, People needs to aware of the false advertisement and plan thrie finance properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hat this trend is impacting our life as everyday MNCs are coming with new products and i...
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Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...order to sustain the product for a long period of time, they add chemicals and preservatives. ...
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Line 4, column 470, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
..., they add chemicals and preservatives. Hence people are getting fresh items even tho...
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Line 6, column 324, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... they do not require that thing at all. Thus they spend money on useless stuffs and ...
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Line 8, column 107, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
...r quality of the products and trying to provides the items with same quality to all cust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95847750865 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67738245595 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2313742384 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287652347099 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103570704341 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754179198049 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166352468929 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077159931788 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.