Most people prefer to eat ready food rather than homemade food these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These Days people can’t waste any second from their time, since they need to work extra hours and don’t have time to prepare their food. That’s why, most of the people prefer to eat ready food and not homemade food, but there are advantages and disadvantages of eating fast food.
On one hand, eat ready food for some people has advantages. First, people turn to fast food, to save time and benefit from it tow work more; that’s why most supermarkets and coffee shop sell ready and frozen foods. Second, in most homes, family members are working and don’t have time for preparation, so they prefer to order delivery or eat outside. However, some human beings say that ready food is cheaper than making their own food, since they need to purchase all the ingredients and sometime the taste won’t be the same as the fast food. For example, when I am home, and my wife didn’t cook, I prefer to eat ready food from the fridge or call for a delivery.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages from eating ready food and may cause some problems. First, eating unhealthy and ready food, will cause health problems after period of time, such as obesity, diabetes and even heartaches due to the increase of fat rate inside the human body. Second, people will spend all their money on food, where they can save and benefit from it, by doing healthy activities or they can fill their refrigerator with healthy food for a whole month, where everyone inside the family can eat. Moreover, people won’t be active to cook, they become lazy sitting in-front of the TV and eating whatever they ordered. For example, one of my friends, spend all this salary on ordering each day fast food, later he faced a health problem, and entered to the hospital for treatment.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages from eating fast food rather than homemade food. That’s why there is two kind of people, some prefer ready food than homemade and vise versa.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... food, will cause health problems after period of time, such as obesity, diabetes and even hea...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...made food. That's why there is two kind of people, some prefer ready food than ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ady food than homemade and vise versa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39884438054 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505847953216 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5693680842 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442788731364 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204051965269 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154027826588 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349590479848 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105143006797 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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