Most people prefer to eat ready food rather than homemade food these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days people can’t waste any second from their time, they need to work extra hours and don’t have time to prepare their food. That’s why, most of the people prefer to eat ready food and not homemade food, but there are advantages and disadvantages of eating fast food.
On one hand, most people eat ready food and think that they can benefit from it for their own benefit. First, people turn to fast food, to save time and benefit from it tow work more; that’s why most supermarkets and coffee shop sell ready and frozen foods. Second, in most homes, family members are working and don’t have time for preparation, so they prefer to order delivery or eat outside. However, human beings say that ready food is cheaper than making their own food, since they need to purchase all the ingredients and sometime the taste won’t be the same as the fast food. For example, when I am home, and my wife didn’t cook, I prefer to eat ready food from the fridge or call for a delivery.
On the other hand, eating ready food may cause some problems and have some disadvantages. First, eating unhealthy and ready food, will cause health problems after period, such as obesity, diabetes and even heartaches due to the increase of fat rate inside the human body. Second, people will spend all their money on food, where they can save and benefit from it, by doing healthy activities or they can fill their refrigerator with healthy food for a whole month, where everyone inside the family can eat. Moreover, people won’t be active to cook, they become lazy sitting in-front of the TV and eating whatever they ordered. For example, one of my friends, spend all this salary on ordering each day fast food, later he faced a health problem, and entered to the hospital for treatment.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages from eating fast food than homemade food. That’s why there is two kind of people, some says that ready food needs less time and have other advantages, others think that it has negative impacts and cause several problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...entered to the hospital for treatment. In conclusion, there are advantages and ...
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Suggestion: kinds
...made food. That's why there is two kind of people, some says that ready food ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8495821727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38561133476 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50139275766 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2573923885 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.357142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393561522322 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180978427064 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14992117616 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295068361423 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745123592423 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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