Most people prefer ready to eat food than home-made food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages.
The modern life style and hectic schedules are encouraging more and more people to consume ready to eat food. In my opinion, the benefits seem too exiguous when compared to the drawbacks as consuming these foods regularly can lead to harmful diseases.
Irrefutably, in recent years numbers of people who are being hospitalized by terminal health problems like cancer or kidney problems are on a rise. The main reason for this unfortunate situation is due to the increased consumption of packaged food or ready eats food. As these foods are full of calories and lack nutrients. It is also addictive and makes people to consume them more and more. Children are worst affected by them. They often suffer from behavior issues due to high sugar content and high calories.
In contrast, for employees who are working for long hours because of their lethargy are not able to cook food. As an alternative they find these ready to eat food very useful and helps them to save time. And also these types of foods are useful in cases of emergency situations where cooking of food is not possible. For example, in case of floods or war, these types of foods help the individual to survive where cooking food is not a practical option. Additionally, Astronauts completely depend on these types of foods.
In conclusion, convenience is the only beneficial factor these packaged food or ready to eat products offer. Regular consumption of these foods can result in several serious health issues. Thus the benefits are definitely eclipsed by the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ful diseases. Irrefutably, in recent years numbers of people who are being hospita...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...esult in several serious health issues. Thus the benefits are definitely eclipsed by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98069498069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61557863984 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8737132093 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282525538547 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978175692713 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902352458151 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185608555431 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458270524679 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.