Museums are places of cultural beauty and historical interest for many people. Some museums are open to public for free of charges. On the other hand, many museums set a fixed entrance fee. In my opinion, the benefits of charging entrance fee at museums outnumber the limitations. The following paragraphs analyze the advantages of collecting fees at museums.
Firstly, entrance fees increase the income of museums. These centers do not have any other forms of revenue. That means, the respective governments have to look after all the financial matters of these types of organizations. The revenue generated at museums could be used for paying employees’ salary and renovating the damaged areas of the museum. Thus it increases the financial capacity of museums. Hill palace at Cochin is a perfect example of this type of museums.
Secondly, charging an entry fee could normally restrict the entry of people who are not interested in history and culture. For instance, if admissions are free of cost people like lovers, beggars and rogues may enter and hinder the seriousness of the place. Moreover, it can lead to congestion in the public museums and actual visitors may stay away from visiting the museums. Hence, admission fees at museums play an important role in restricting people from using museums for personal purposes and providing hassle free entry and visit for the real art lovers.
In conclusion, I believe that the merits of charging entry fees at museums are more than demerits because this increases the revenues of the arts center and stops people from using these institutions for their personal objectives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...vating the damaged areas of the museum. Thus it increases the financial capacity of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, after all, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1884057971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67884741679 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2037783441 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6363636364 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294085710985 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989306573879 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843420782709 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19267450812 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037841474403 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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