Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, fruit and vegetables are being transferred by planes to nations which they cannot grow them or are out of season. It is often argued that, export fruit and vegetables between countries have both advantages and disadvantages. This essay shows positives and negatives sides of food crops which has been exported by air.

On the positive side, transporting goods such as fruit and vegetables by airplanes from countries to other nations not only does give us the choise to eat a variety of fruits and vegetables from different culture but also we can eating all types of crops anytime of the year. For instance, about 10 years ago, at Egypt we can eat Watermelon at afew months only from June to July , but now we can find it in markets anytime of the year. Moreover, we can eat Indian fruits which are not available before at Egypt.

One the negative side, importing fruits and vegetables over long distance by air from far counteries lead to put some chamical material by exporting company in order to keep it fresh for long time.In addation to that, it increase the taxes on goods;consequantly, the prices of these item become high.In 2017, a research from the World Health Organization showed that , the chamical material was been put on crops during transporting it causes dangours deseases such as cancer.

In conclusion, transporting fruits and vegetables by air has a positive side which gives us choice to eat many types of them which comes from different nations . but we should take care from its backdraws which it may effect on our health.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88721804511 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71230291668 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.547143864 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.444444444 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223209323626 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105650961299 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857480032941 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149627969009 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116896067644 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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