Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The usage of air transportation has a highly increase to export fruits and vegetables via continents, where they are unable to implant different kinds of crops in different seasons. This esseay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of food crops' air transportated.
On one hand, air transportantion has many positive aspects. Such as speed, it's the fastest way to deliver food crops in its fresh condition, which allows mediterranean' nations for example to try tropical or Indian food crops. In addition to that, it strengthens the economic relationships between countries to guarantee the success of the transportation process. In 2017, the New York Times newspapper published a study which showed that developing countries' economy has risen by 30% after improving their crops productivity up to exporting level.
However, aeroplane food transportation has negative consequences. Not only the increasing in foreign crops' prices, but also side health effects. As crops companies used to add chemical material on fruits and vegetables in order to keep them fresh for a longer period, while keeping it in cooled containers. A research has been pulished by the World Health Organization confirmed that serious health diseases such as cancer are related to the hermones and the chemical material in food crops.
In conclusion, the power of food crops' air transferring has shifted from the hands of a few to the hands of the mass. Global trade allowed the world's fruits and vegetables to be available in any market through continents and in any season of the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s many positive aspects. Such as speed, its the fastest way to deliver food crops i...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
... while keeping it in cooled containers. A research has been pulished by the World Health O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27091633466 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05013321772 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0914964883 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237833038622 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775750756067 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708191001461 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144684209042 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097583269529 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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