The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate.
What problems does it cause and how can we solve these problems.
The high usages of non-renewable sources of energy like oil, forests and fresh water is subject of raising concern worldwide. Consequently, it will leave numerous negative outcomes to humankind, if these limited resources will not be used wisely. To overcome these issues, government ought to take necessary actions at first place, which this essay will discuss ahead.
To begin, with regards to mass people, the impact of shortage of natural resources have has clear disadvantages because limited resources are difficult to replenish, and therefore, individual people will be forced to live without it. Firstly, Fuel is considered to be the base of a country's economy, and many countries have started facing fuel crisis. For instance, some rich countries such as USA, UAE and, China have already started to store crude oil for future purpose of local use and import. Next, deforestation has the huge impact on climate change, namely global warming. It has been proved that due to deforestation the concentration of CO2 and other harmful gases, which work as a firewood in increasing the global warming, are at the peak. Consequently, the Glaciers of Antarctica are melting at a pace, and probably one day it will sink the earth. Lastly, water is the most precious element of human life because people cannot imagine life without it. As per a recent research, only 3% of ground water is left to use worldwide, rest 97% are saline water which cannot turn into fresh water. For example, many countries like India is already facing a huge shortage of ground water, and hence, it has started working on its master plan on waste water management, and conserving rain water.
On the other hand, to cope with these problems government and individual person should come forward in taking the necessary measures because either an individual person or government cannot address such vast problems alone. Firstly, to overcome oil crisis government should make effort in bringing green energy available in ample amount nationwide. Green energy is Clean Energy, and admittedly, it will also help in handling the Global Warming. For instance, India has recently encouraged the use of EV to reduce the usages of oil in vehicles. This initiative will surely help in lowering air pollution, and hence, global warming. Secondly, the unnecessary uses of forest should be stopped to fulfill human luxury needs. For example millions of trees has been cut in USA alone to make tissue paper. Lastly, government should take the initiatives in spreading awareness programs nationally on saving water. it's high time to include the subjects in primary classes at schools about the importance of water, and its increasingly shortage impact on people. Moreover, rainwater conservation, recycling, and reuse of waste water are the best way to deal the shortage of freshwater. For illustration, Japan has started practicing the use of waste water in flushing the human waste in its public toilet.
To conclude, the less availability of limited resources have many negative impacts to the mankind. It is leading to live next generation in an artificial world, where everything will be man-made. As a result, the peak time has come to take care of our surroundings and conserve the natural resources by recycling, reuse, storage, and releasing awareness programme in public interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2820.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 542.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20295202952 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73658968081 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522140221402 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 904.5 506.74238477 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3298357781 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187825394395 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451309151843 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341924704179 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11688755345 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215634501996 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 78.4519038076 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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